The sweaty rain fell upon the earth in hordes upon
hordes, like a volley of liquid spears thrown down at the armies of the world.
The whipping wind stirred it into spirals as it fell, creating a tearing
vicious storm in the hands of the darkness. The bleeding sky tore open in a
brilliant flash of forked light. A crack tumbled forward, carried on the wings
of the wind, as if a veil had been torn.
In the light
the President thought he could see faces, ghostly shapes in the darkness beyond
the weeping window. Their eyes, pale and weak, shone with a determined light
that was at the same time brave and dwindling.
He could always
see them on rainy nights. He remembered these faces well. He remembered the
motorcade, the darkness, the slashing storm that bit into the cheeks of hearty
men much braver than he. They had protected him. He had not protected them.
He remembered
with grave detail the feel of the fountain pen in his hand, the peculiar way it
slightly slipped every single time, every single time he inscribed the “u” into the grainy papers at 2:00 a.m.
At 2:00 a.m. his signature had changed forever. Even today the pen, the same
pen, slipped.
“There’s no
such thing as solace,” muttered the President. “No such thing.” He turned his
head down and stared at the carpet. All he could hear in the rumbling of the
thunder was the firing of the guns. All he felt was the press of the seat into
his shoulder as he was flung down away from the window. The lightning was a
flashing muzzle. Seven men gave life and limb. Seven men to whom he was more
indebted than to anyone, and whom he could never repay. Seven men, seven years
ago. Now it was his last night in the Oval Office. He turned away from the window.
I LOVE this! Fantastic descriptive terms, and excellent emotion built into the text. I love how even though you don't tell us specifically what happened, you feel like you know... somehow. Dazzlingly sad, invoking pity for this unnamed president. And the ending.... well, I don't even know how to describe it. It's perfect.
ReplyDeleteAnd supsenseful!
Very well done, Mr. Stride. :D
Thanks. I really enjoyed this short piece.
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